This is our new and updated proposal after constructive criticism.
It's all shiny and new and looks a lot better than before.
Feedback -
To improve, what we did was to talk further about the colour schemes and lighting so there would be a clear sense of the tone. We chose a monochromatic colour scheme with a sudden splash of colour; something striking such as a clear and sharp red on a flower which would be a running motif throughout.
We thought that everything was a little too crowded so we spaced it out onto different pages to make everything a little easier to understand and interpret.
We added a Treatment page and explicitly said our genre, that it is a concept video.
Pitch -
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